At Smedley Butler’s Grave by W.D. Ehrhart

The renowned poet W.D. Ehrhart’s latest collection is At Smedley Butler’s Grave (Moonstone Press, 40 pp., $10, paper), a chapbook of 40 razor-edged poems, some of which have appeared in journals, newsletters, and other chapbooks.

The subjects range in time from Bill Ehrhart’s childhood to his present advanced Baby Boomer age bracket, and in subjects from growing-up observances to tough-minded political musings. Several mention the Vietnam War and his service as a Marine in it.

That includes a few lines in the title poem and “The Longest Night of My Life,” which deals with a night in Vietnam in November 1967 and ends with these lines:

Raining hard. Cold in November

Me already utterly soaked. Teeth chattering.

No dry clothes. No place dry. Middle of nowhere

Sunrise hours away. Five/ Maybe six.

This is a top-notch collection from an accomplished man of letters.

Bill Ehrhart’s website is www.wdehrhart.com

–Marc Leepson

Things We Carry Still edited by Lisa Stice and Randy Brown

Things We Carry Still: Poems & Micro-Stories about Military Gear (Middle West Press, 194 pp. $19.99, paper; $9.99, Kindle) is an outstanding collection of the current work of more than 50 of today’s leading war writers. It includes more than 100 poems and very short (micro) short stories. Editors Lisa Stice and Randy Brown are veteran and writers. The vast majority of works are written by men and women who have served in the wars in Iraq and Afghanistan, although others deal with military service going back to World War II. Full disclosure: An original poem of mine appears in this book.

Here’s Vietnam War veteran Paul Hellweg’s sobering poem, “Boots in the Mud”:

Shivering in cold rain

water dripping off poncho

standing in soupy mud,

you watch and contemplate

as five pairs of empty boots

are placed next to five

M16 automatic rifles

each with a helmet on top

all in a neat row, stuck in the mud.

Emotionally drained,

you want to remember and honor

but mostly you’re just grateful

and pray your boots

moldy and mildewed

remain where they are,

on your feet.

Vietnam War veteran Paul Hellweg

Kate Carey shares a memory of her brother’s death in Vietnam in 1968 in her story “Ouroboros in a Hula Hoop.” Here’s the first paragraph:

“My brother had about twenty bucks in his wallet when he was killed, saved for a cold beer in some dingy bar near Saigon. Mom split it between me, age nine, and my brother, eleven. He says he doesn’t remember. I bought a hula hoop.”

 In “Hot Landing Zone,” Vietnam War veteran Dennis Maulsby writes:

thrumthrumthrum

rushing blurred-canopy jungle

dripdripdrip

stinking sweat-oiled bodies

chukchukchuk

hovering flesh-cutting guns

swikswikswik

crossing spin-burning tracers

whumpwhumpwhump

exploding skin-flaying shrapnel

mommommom

screaming bloody-gutted friend

movemovemove

son of a bitch!

Co-editor Randy Brown’s short poem, “excerpt from ‘your squad leader writes haiku,’” works for any era of warfare.

Take care of your feet.

Dry sox are better than sex

out here in the field.

The beginning of “Soldier’s Song” by Iraq and Afghanistan war Army veteran Ben Weakley, also applies to any conflict.

More life exists in the tip

of a bullet smacking

the concrete wall

beside your head

than in a decade spent

commuting to work in traffic

paying the mortgage on time

loving one woman and two children

and taking vacations at the beach.

Iraq and Afghanistan War veteran Ben Weakly

Some of the post-Vietnam War writers included in the anthology are Aly Allen, Eric Chandler, Jehanne Dubrow, Amalie Flynn, Peter Molin, Abby Murray, Juan Manuel Perez, and Andria Williams.

Writing in the Foreword, Army veteran Vicki Hudson notes: “There are many stories within these pages. Each is an act of courage, first in writing and then in sharing.”

The anthology includes ten pages of discussion and writing prompts to use in workshops and book clubs. Mark this one as required reading for insightful and artistic glimpses into the minds and memories of men and women who have served, as well as family members who waited, holding down the fort at home.

–Bill McCloud

Nightmares That Leave Grease Stains on Psych Ward Walls: Poems on Endless War  by Robert Bohm

Nightmares That Leave Grease Stains on Psych Ward Walls: Poems on Endless War (Spuyten Duyvil Publishing,172 pp, paperback), by Robert Bohm is a collection of poetry that bores in on the idea that the senseless madness of war ends up creating a societal madness that cannot be separated from wartime.

Or something like that.

Bohm was drafted into the Army in 1967, and served in Germany with the 225th Station Hospital as a clerk where he heard horror stories about the war from hospitalized Vietnam War veterans. Several of his books, including Vietnam War in Closing the Hotel Kitchen, deal with the Vietnam War.

Much of Nightmares deals with the Vietnam War, though Bohn also addresses America’s post-9/11 conflicts. The great opening poem reads at first as though the subject character is in combat, then you realize he’s actually at home going through through flashbacks.

In “Recalling January 11, 1967,” a recruit reports to Fort Hamilton in Brooklyn and enters:

a building where all the hallways led

it was alleged

to the same culmination—

our maturation into men.

Meanwhile, far away, at

a paddy’s edge, a baby rice shoot, fragile

as whatever binds the mind together, trembled

between a dead dog’s splayed legs

trying to tell us something

But we weren’t there to hear.

In “Soon enough I’m taking it in stride,” we read:

Like the others, I’m

a carrier

of the sacred.

I bring it with me

as we trek in country. Can you

smell it? It’s in my fatigues, the scent

of incense from huts you’ve never seen.

Like God, the huts

light up the world, as they burn behind us

Like the Holy Ghost, no VC

moves loudly enough to be noticed

Alone with my native tongue, I must

unlearn what it once claimed to know

but didn’t.

But first I must remember

which sound means grunt, which groan

 “A memory of Aaron’s return” opens with these lines:

Light as the wasp wing in the porch corner,

the weight

of what will never be.

In “For all of us there’s something,” there’s:

It’s all

so clear. How, with him squealing like a pig

in your arms, his blood soaks

through your shirt. That’s

when you hear all the tugboats back home

in the East River sink.

From “The Few”:

Many of us died. Those who didn’t carried those who did on our backs for the rest of our lives.

From “New Orleans Psalm”:

Live long enough and soon the evening shadows become

the ashes we smear on our bread before we gorge on it

as the unknown appears where

no one knew it could—this time

where a water moccasin glides into view inside a tear

falling from a child’s eye.

There may, indeed, be madness in these poems. It’s partly expressed by the confusion caused by an overwhelming loss of a sense of time and place. Confusion in such lines as: “Did it even happen?” and “When did I return?”

Time periods mix together. There are religious references and sacrilegious phrases. At times, it seemed like everything is happening at once. It’s almost enough to drive a person crazy.

I strongly recommend this book of poetry of war, but steel yourself before opening it up.

–Bill McCloud

The Valley of Sorrows by L. Ericson

The Valley of Sorrows (Outskirts Press, 93 pp. $19.95, paper; $8.49, Kindle) is a powerful work of poetry. I call it a “work” because it’s basically written as one poem. There is no Table of Contents and only a handful of what could be considered poem titles. So, basically, there’s one poem—and it works. Ericson served in the Vietnam War with the 3rd Battalion in the 5th Marine Regiment.

Ericson’s Prologue alerts us to the fact that it is the summer of 1967 and we are in the Que Son Valley. “This was an ancient place,” he writes, “Old when Christ walked Galilee…with violence woven into it.” More precisely, it’s “8,000 miles/from Wilshire and Main.”

From “With Honors”:

23 days in the bush

every day an adrenaline rush

he’d dropped 30 pounds

fired off 300 rounds

blew 4 duds and a tunnel

used his helmet as a funnel

to look at him you’d never know

he graduated high school 8 months ago.

The poem “Dear Mom:”

We wrote lies.

Everything’s fine.

(18 guys died)

The weather’s been hot.

(another guy got shot)

We’re going to China Beach.

(got bit by a leach)

Can you send some hot sauce?

(a patrol went out all were lost)

Well guess that’s all, see you soon.

(the op starts at noon.)

A few pages later we encounter this thoughtful stanza:

Watched the eclipse

saw the moon eat the sun

as old souls

devoured

the young

And, there’s the time of reckoning:

When the little ones ask

“What did you do in the war Grandpa?”

Survived.

Came home alive.

Saw a lot of good men die.

So I could sit with you.

Teach you to tie your shoes

Watch you swing a bat.

Dress your dolls in hats.

All I did was worth all that.

To have this time with you.

Then, a few pages later:

And the kids wonder what to do with Dad

And that, my friends, is just damn sad.

What to do with the guy

Who once flew the skies

Walked the trails waded the rivers

Suffered malaria’s shivers

Carried the bodies of his friends

Fought a war without end

Spent his nights in a hole

Spoke not a word told not a soul

What do we do now that he’s old?

And later:

I’ve got old man hands

How it happened I don’t understand

The same that swung a detector over the roads

The same that use to lock and load

These that pulled off the leech

That buried themselves in China Beach

These that worked a P38

So I could have a bite to eat

These the ones that rigged the charge

Made small work of traps small and large

These the ones that pulled the trigger

I’ve got an old man’s hands …go figure.

This is a beautifully packaged book, from the cover to the interior photographs. All in all, it is a sobering look at aging veterans of the American war in Vietnam and a consideration of what will be lost once they all are gone. To wit:

This valley we walked but left no tread

wiped up the blood

policed our dead

If you were to look there today

there is nothing left to say

We were there then went away.

–Bill McCloud

The Boxer of Quirinal by John Barr

The Boxer of Quirinal (Red Hen Press, 80 pp. $22, paper) is a new collection of John Barr’s poems. Barr, a former president of the Poetry Foundation, served as a Navy officer on destroyers for five years which included three tours of duty in the Vietnam War theater of operations. This is his tenth book of poetry. Some of his previous books, including The Hundred Fathom Curve (2011), contain poems inspired by his service in the war.  

The poems in The Boxer of Quirinal deal with life and death in the natural world as well as in conflicts created by humans. The title comes from an ancient Greek statue depicted on the cover.

A good example of Barr’s poetic style is in this stanza of “Season of Spores”:

The scatter of moon-colored stuff

erupts from the mire, unfurls

a bric-a-brac of fluke and ruff,

lavender cap, topiary puff.

Here is the entire poem, “The Hoard”:

A weekend seeker, sweeping his detector

through abandoned fields, hears the tone.

Digging deep he finds no urn of coins,

penannular pins, but a box—locked

and full of unsigned poems. Words

beaten thin and fitted to a face;

the shaped whistle of a master’s voice

from a world not ours –overheard.

Fascicles in an Amherst attic,

bulls on cave walls in Dordogne:

Troves of inner gold, hidden—

but why? And if not us, who for?

The book also contains a poem about Scotland’s first lending library, and one titled “In a Taverna” that consists of a conversation among Greek mythology’s Leda, Europa, and Cassandra. “Chicago, Tell Me Who You Are” celebrates the people and culture of the city, but the first stanza won’t allow you to forget its early history:

I’m a city with a past, a memory

of fire. No fear is like the fear

of a wooden city on a windy day.

Even the people were on fire. “Throw me in the river.

she told her husband. “I’d rather drown than burn.”

These words from “The Gods of War” very well could evoke what Barr saw in Vietnam a half century ago:

Each side claims the other fired first.

In the soft dark, sudden muzzle flashes,

tracers arching orange against the sky’

star shells falling terrible and red

like the gates of hell opening, closing.

John Barr creates dense, thoughtful poetry that will challenge you at every turn. Stay with it and you’ll be the better for it.

Barr’s website is johnbarrpoetry.com

–Bill McCloud

Patriot Songs by Jerry L. Staub

Patriot Songs: Poems about Brave Patriots Who Sacrificed to Keep America Safe and Free (68 pp. $7.95, paperbackis a small collection of rather old-fashioned-style rhyming poetry that celebrates the service of men and women throughout our nation’s history. Staub is an American veteran with a lifelong interest in military history.

“A Hero Plain and Simple” addresses the idea of a quiet, everyday hero taking care of his loved ones:

He works hard to support his family,

Each day of every long and tiring week.

He lives his life with grace and dignity,

While praise and notoriety, he never seeks.

“A Memorial Day Prayer” begins this way:

Many American soldiers have marched into eternity.

They’ve given everything they had to give;

Their lives, their souls, and their prosperity.

They sacrificed it all so in freedom we might live.

From “The Appetite of War (The Siege of Firebase Ripcord)”:

Fearful eyes scan a blurry horizon to the fore,

when thunderous blasts all at once begin to roar.

Flashes of light, then screams, right and left,

as shadowy figures trip the wires of death.

Heavy fire along heavily barricaded battle lines,

keep heads pinned down, as retorts it undermines.

Deadly rounds buzz through leaves and trees,

like swarms of thousands of angry bees.

There is likely no other form of writing that can be as personal and heartfelt as poetry, and it’s always enjoyable to read how veterans use the medium to express themselves. None of these poems appear to have been previously published in any literary journals.

Half of the net proceeds from the royalties of this book will be donated to nonprofit veterans’ organizations, including Vietnam Veterans of America.

–Bill McCloud

Nam to Now by Michael Harold Davis

Nam to Now (JacksonDavis, 222 pp. $30, hardcover; $25, paper) is a collection of poems written mainly over the past decade by Michael Harold Davis, a U.S. Marine Corps Vietnam War veteran. His poetry book is one of a very few dealing with the Vietnam War containing verses written in a rhyming scheme.

In “William Harvey Little,” for instance, Davis writes:

I met him just days ago.

But we were actually kin.

Not because of the blood we have,

But because of where we’ve been.

We went to a war together,

We’ve shed the very same tears.

I didn’t know William Harvey long,

But it feels like 40 years.

And in  “Cup-A-Joe”:

But I had monsoons in Nam.

I’ve cycled in a hurricane.

But I would ride right into the eye,

If I could silence my brain.

The Blues begins with this stanza:

I hate that my woman left me.

But I know she had to go.

Why did she take the dog?

And why did she leave so slow?

There are also poems of love and loss, such as “Only a Parsec Away”

I speak a broken language.

When I have anything to say.

But then again and then again,

Words just get in the way.

There was a time way back in time,

I held her love in sway.

With ancient eyes, I see her,

She’s only a parsec away.

Davis makes frequent use of wordplay. Sometimes it works; other times it’s distracting. The poetry here is, for the most part, simplistic, but heartfelt and wrapped in a religious tone.

I recommend the book because every veteran’s voice cries out to be heard and Michael Harold Davis certainly has a distinctive poetic voice.

–Bill McCloud

Brothers & Sisters Like These

Brothers & Sisters Like These: An Anthology of Writing by Veterans (Redhawk Publications, 185 pp. $15, paperback) is a collection of 77 very short stories and poems by 36 North Carolina veterans, with a Preface by Dr. Richard Kelly and an Introduction by Elizabeth Heaney.

 “Writing programs for veterans have existed since the Second World War to help veterans make sense of their military experience and honor the voices inside needing to be heard,” Dr. Kelly notes. The selections in this book come from one such program.

Some notable entries include:

“A Good Place,” in which Mike Smith visits the Vietnam Veterans Memorial, climbs a ladder, and as he reaches “toward Larry,” the names on The Wall start to come to life.

“Shiva’s Dance Card” by Pete Ramsey, which deals with American troops trying to negotiate with a Vietnamese woman to make up for the loss of her two ducks.

Steve Henderson’s “Tribe,” in which he writes that “To meet and share all of our stories and understand the times, the dangers, the emotions, has been uplifting and therapeutic for me.”

“What I Brought Back” in which Ted Minnick writes that he returned from Vietnam with “an appreciation for brotherhood, a deeper appreciation for spouse and family, and a sneaky hidden disease called Agent Orange.”

Renee Hermancek, who served during Desert Storm, writes: “Being a woman, the uniform carried more for me and others. M.W. Whore. Bitch. Marine. Teammate. Job title. At any moment I can fulfill any one of those titles or all of them depending on who I’m speaking to.”

“The Pillowcase,” by Midge Lorence, which deals with her husband dying in hospice, leaving her with feelings of anger and his pillowcase that she doesn’t want to remove from its pillow. 

“One of These Boots” by Gabriel Garcia, a poetic tribute to the men and women who perished during her nine months in Afghanistan.

“No Escape,” in which Vietnam War veteran Ray Crombe is trying to get away from PTSD. Here’s his last paragraph: “It was a long road back, and for so long, I thought the suffering was deserved – the warranted consequences of poor choices. I instinctively knew that Justice is getting what we deserve. Then found out that Grace is getting God’s Goodness – which we don’t deserve. But for which I – for one – am eternally grateful.”

Frank Cucumber’s poem, “I Used to Be,” is about how his Drill Instructor at Fort Gordon made him into who he is today. It’s not something he’s proud of.

This isn’t the type of anthology you judge on its literary merit. The work here is about honesty and truth and the courage to dig deep down into yourself and have the willingness to bring what you find out into the light.

Brothers & Sisters is one of the few books that nothing negative can be said about. It’s a literary powerhouse.

–Bill McCloud

The Stinger by D.E. Ritterbusch

The Stinger (Eclectic Blue Publishing, 151 pp. $15, paperback) is the latest collection of poetry from D.E. Ritterbusch. A U.S. Army Vietnam War veteran, Ritterbusch recently retired as a professor of English at the University of Wisconsin-Whitewater.

Let’s get this part over with: The Stinger is a masterwork. The poems relate the wide world of sports to the wider world of culture, family, politics, and war. A stinger is an especially hard-thrown baseball—and, indeed, baseball is the subject of most of the poems in this collection, some of which have appeared in Deadly Writer’s Patrol, Vietnam War Generation Journal, and War, Literature & the Arts.

“Poetry and sports are play but serious play, serious business as well,” Ritterbush notes in the book’s introductory wssay.

The first poem, “The Stinger,” sets a high mark of quality that’s found throughout the book. It’s a vivid, powerful description of the poet as a young boy and his relationship with his stepfather as played out during an evening game of catch. The second poem, “Running with a Coyote,” is just as powerful and describes what you would expect from its title.

Boxing takes center stage in “Soft Hands,” which includes another definition of “stinger.”

He remembers previous fights, how he fought

with a broken knuckle, how it almost

healed and then another fight broke it again …

his adversary knows he’s nursing his right,

relying on a flurry of sharp left jabs:

the subterfuge flowers like a welt, forces him

to throw a hard, countering right:

his opponent, anticipating, lowers his head

deliberately, directly into the punch

to break that hand again—

the sharp sting ran up his arm

and shorted in his brain, as if all the nerves were fused.

“Running at Midnight” finds Ritterbusch running on “the last cinder track in the city.” After his run, a stranger hungry for conversation, wants to visit.

I wish her well, and jog back

to whatever awaits, slowing perceptibly,

leaving her beneath the circling summer stars,

all of us learning to pace ourselves

as best we can, searching, calling,

running through our nights. Some of the answers

swirl like insects around a street lamp,

some of them flare to ash in the light.

In “44” we read how the longest period of time always seemed to be between Hank Aaron’s plate appearances in a game, and how Hank fired a kid’s imagination:

Always it hung across the plate,

belt high, as my wrists broke,

and the hard crack of the ball

resounding off that bat rose above the world,

beyond the deep left center of everything.

There are poems about life lessons that can be found while fishing with a child, sledding in the snow, and playing hoops with old men past their time. There’s a description of two women playing a game of topless darts, as well as poems about wrestling, hunting grasshoppers, and skinny-dipping.

In “Garage Day,” the young poet is throwing a ball off the side of a garage, in late afternoon:

until crickets sing in the shadows,

until the sky softens like his glove to evening.

I often read entire poems with my mouth agape in wonder. This is a great collection.

–Bill McCloud

Savage Pastures by John Partin

Savage Pastures: Poems of Strife and the Vietnam War (71 pp. $8.99, paper; $4.99, Kindle), by John Partin is a collection of poems about the war, bookended by verses about struggling to survive working in the red-dirt rural South. From 1966-72 Partin was a finance officer for a bank on contract with the Marine Corps. That work included duty as a financial liaison for U.S. Marines in South Vietnam and their families back home. That put Partin in contact with many of the men in-country, as well as families of those who didn’t make it home from the war.

In “A Train to Catch,” a young man has enlisted in the military and preparing to do his part in the Second World War:

As the world blackened in war,

A cancerous presence that so radically changed our lives.

And then:

Into the gathering darkness.

The time was here.

The train was coming.

Almost eerily, the trees changed into looming immobile spheres.

Long shadows draped Warren, a horrible enveloping foreboding.

Once we arrive in the Vietnam War, there is “Pastures to Lie In.”: Medics in helmets of white crosses/Screaming-pushing multiple compresses to/Land mined ghosts of legs

In “Homeless,” a Vietnam War veteran is wearing an Army green coat, faded, frayed/Sargent striped remembrance of life

All the while, he is living in An America grown silent/To men of war

In “War Death”:

And the go-go bars of Court Street in Jacksonville,/Where Vietnam comes back/In black light and pulsating probe,/Illuminating the dancers

In “Dragonfly”:

A dragonfly

Hovering in iridescent bluish splendor.

The flurry of wings

Etching a beating helicopter blade memory

Rooftop staccato rhythm to belching bullet casings

Blazing streams into Vietnam rice paddies

The mounted door gun a death appendage

Hunting peasants working, defecating in fields.

The first killing an ethereal horror

That evolved to lust.

In “Distant Thunder”:

War cannon lighted nights

Explosive chaos.

Fear.

And deserted prayer.

Prayer screamed in horror

Until the heart closed to faith.

Lost. Abandoned. Devoured.

By war.

In “Butterflies of Vietnam” we read these hauntingly beautiful lines:

Menacing cobra head in a bottle

On a half-broken shelf

Once in a brothel in Saigon,

The brothel a searching last hope of angel’s touch

To minds no longer able to feel

And eyes no longer able to see

The unseen coiled terror of days.

And now,

The chopper landed

And butterflies returned

Floating white to the field.

There is death in John Partin’s poems—in combat and in the rooms of a VA Medical Center. This is a short but solid collection that holds up well on rereading.

–Bill McCloud